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Start and stop poems!

on June 6, 2013

Waiting in the cold!

Waiting in the cold,
with my hopes up and my doubts slowly seeping in.
Standing in the fog,
feeling so cold like I’m a statue.
As I hear the the news,
my heart drops as the words whisper in my ear
that a loved one has died as I’m
waiting in the cold.

Bahar


2 Responses to “Start and stop poems!”

  1. Juz says:

    Awwww. So sad. You’ve done a great job. You have used some great describing words on how you fell. I could ask for no more. KEEP ON WRITING BECAUSE IT IS GREAT! 🙂
    -Juz

  2. Juz says:

    THAT WAS MEANT TO BE FEEL!! SORRY

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